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1、第一章第一章 句式优化句式优化不同的思想内容当然应该用不同的句式来表达而同一思想内不同的思想内容当然应该用不同的句式来表达而同一思想内容也可以用不同句式来表达句式不同，表达的效果就不容也可以用不同句式来表达句式不同，表达的效果就不同一篇文章中如果反复使用同一句式，就会显得单调乏味，同一篇文章中如果反复使用同一句式，就会显得单调乏味，毫无生气，写作时一定要注意句式的变换，避免单一重复毫无生气，写作时一定要注意句式的变换，避免单一重复1. 1.长句和短句变换长句和短句变换长句使文章富有气势，却容易产生语法错误或造成理解障长句使文章富有气势，却容易产生语法错误或造成理解障碍；短句不容易出错，但是短句

2、的堆砌容易让人感觉语言技巧碍；短句不容易出错，但是短句的堆砌容易让人感觉语言技巧不成熟，不老练不成熟，不老练在实际写作中，一味地采用长句或短句都是在实际写作中，一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的，要注意长短句的交错使用不可取的，要注意长短句的交错使用通常简单而又实用的长短句交错方法是：以简单句为基础，通常简单而又实用的长短句交错方法是：以简单句为基础，配以适当的并列句和复合句简单句可长可短，一般要加些附配以适当的并列句和复合句简单句可长可短，一般要加些附属成分，如分词短语，不定式短语，介词短语，副词短语等属成分，如分词短语，不定式短语，介词短语，副词短语等第一章第一章 句式优化句式优化1. 1.

3、 短句变长句短句变长句 原文原文 Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them. 优化优化 Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them.受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的意思议程英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写出来的句意思议程英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，

4、导致写出来的句子无法体现英语作为子无法体现英语作为“形合语言形合语言”的特点因此，在平时写的特点因此，在平时写作时，考生要注意前后句之间的联系，用恰当的连接词将简作时，考生要注意前后句之间的联系，用恰当的连接词将简单句连接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句增加文章的气单句连接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句增加文章的气势势一长句和短句变换一长句和短句变换1. 1. 短句变长句短句变长句 原文原文 Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances

5、, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty. 优化优化 Pressured by school work. and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 原文原文 Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experi

6、mentation. 优化优化 Usually, a fact is defined as a truth, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation.1. 1. 短句变长句短句变长句4 4 原文原文 When I turned right on the corner, a motorbike knocked into a small car. The motorbike was red. There were two persons on the motorbikes. The car was yellow.

7、 The motorbike fell down. The two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. The driver came out of the car at once, and asked about the two persons injuries. As soon as I saw that, I made a telephone call to 110. the traffic police arrived in a short time.4 4 优化优化 When I turned right on the co

8、rner, a red motorbike with two persons knocked into a small yellow car. Immediately, the motorbike fell down, and the two persons on the motorbike were slightly injured. At that time, the driver came out of the car, and asked about the two persons injuries. Seeing this, I dialed 110. in a short time

9、, the traffic police arrived.第一章第一章 句式优化句式优化一长句和短句变换一长句和短句变换2.2.长句变短句长句变短句 原文原文 His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 优化优化 His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight.长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面最求长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面最求复杂句式，反而会显得华而不实，累赘复杂句式，反而会显得华而不实，累赘写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需

10、要而定，有话则长，写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定，有话则长，无话则短短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精无话则短短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精练，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的忌练，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的忌2.2.长句变短句长句变短句 原文原文 He didnt have enough experience, which is the reason why he didnt do the work well. 优化优化 He didnt do the work well for lack of experience. 原文原文 Per

11、haps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly. 优化优化 They distrusted our judgment.1. 1. 短句变长句短句变长句4 4 原文原文 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really ready for marriage, perhaps because they are still establishing themselves in their careers and havent had enough t

12、ime to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex, but family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married, and so they marry in haste without knowing each other well.4 4 优化优化 A basic reason for divorce is that some people are not really read

13、y for marriage. As they are still establishing themselves in their careers, they havent had enough time to get to know themselves and many members of the opposite sex. However, family pressures make them feel that something is wrong with them since they are not married. So they marry in haste withou

14、t knowing each other well.第一章第一章 句式优化句式优化与汉语相比，英语更注重动作本身，而不是动作的执行者，因与汉语相比，英语更注重动作本身，而不是动作的执行者，因此在英语中被动语态的使用相对多一些，但这并不表明要以此在英语中被动语态的使用相对多一些，但这并不表明要以为地追求被动语态的使用事实上，什么时候用主动，什么为地追求被动语态的使用事实上，什么时候用主动，什么时候用被动，主要是由陈述对象而定英语写作特别强调陈时候用被动，主要是由陈述对象而定英语写作特别强调陈述对象的一致性，因此在选择主动和被动时一定要慎重述对象的一致性，因此在选择主动和被动时一定要慎重1. 1.

15、主动变被动主动变被动 原文原文 We should pay more attention to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country. 优化优化 More attention should be paid to the elderly who had devoted their youth and energy to our country.二主动句和被动句变换二主动句和被动句变换2.2.长句变短句长句变短句 原文原文 When the prime minister arrived at the ai

16、rport, hundreds of reporters surrounded him immediately. 优化优化 When the prime minister arrived at the airport, he was immediately surrounded by hundreds of reporters. 原文原文 The employees elected Mr. li chairman of the committee last week. 优化优化 Mr. li was elected chairman of the committee by the employees last week.第一章第一章 句式优化句式优化 原文原文 Not how much you read but what you read really matters. 优化优化 It is not how much you read but what you read that really matters.三强调句和倒装句变换三强调句和倒装句变换2 2 原文原文 By making