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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目：Thechartbelowshowsthetotalnumberofminutes(inbillions)oftelephonecallsintheUK,dividedintothreecategories,from1995-2002.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Sampleanswer：RevealedinthebarchartisthetimespentintheUKfordifferenttypesoft

2、elephonecallsfrom1995to2002.Generally,amongthethreecategories-local(fixedline),nationalandinternational(fixedline)andmobiles(allcalls),localphonecallsaccountedforthelargestproportionofallusage.Nexttoit,nationalandinternationalonestookthesecondposition.Atthebottomofthelist,themobilestookupthesmallest

3、part.(首段概括介绍了图表内容，指出了三种不同电话各自的份额，为接下来的论述做好铺垫)Thetrendsofthetelephoneusagechangedduringtheeightyears.First,thelocalphonecallspeakedatabout90billionminutesin1999,andthenstartedtodeclinetothe1995figurein2002at70billion.However,thetrendsoftheothertwocalltypeskeptincreasing.Nationalandinternationalcallss

4、implyrosesteadilyovertheyears.Themostnoticeablechangewasthetrendofcellphones,whichsoared,alsonever-endinglyrising.（此段分别指出了三种不同类型的电话各自的通话时间量和排名，并指出了他们的变化趋势）InsumzpeopleusedlocalfixedlinesthemostintheUK.Meanwhile,themobileswerebecomingincreasinglypopular.（收尾总结全文，点出了图表最显著的两点特征）满分要素剖析语言表达表示所占比例常用的词组，acc

5、ountfor,takeup等；表示增加降低常用的词组，peak,declinetofrisesteadily,soar等值得借鉴。逻辑结构文章采用总-分-总结构。开篇指出了图表涉及的三种电话类型各自通话时间所占份额。接下来详细分析了其中的数据以及其反映出来的变化趋势。最后总结了全文，指出了图表最显著的特征。题目：Thetwomapsbelowshowanislanctbeforeandaftertheconstructionofsometouristfacilities.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures

6、,andmakecomparisonswhererelevantSampleanswer：Thetwodrawingsillustratethechangesofthesameislandbeforeandaftertheconstructionofsometransportandservicebuildings.（首段综述原题，对两个表格的内容进行概括描述）Itisclearthatbeforedevelopment,thehorizontalisland,whichisabout260meterslong,hasafewtreesonbothitseastandwestsides.Furt

7、hermore,onthewestedge,asmallbeachiscreatedfortourisminthefuture.Thelayoutchangestremendouslyafterbuildingsareconstructedalongalmostthewholeisland.Meanwhile,thetreesontheeastsidearekeptleavinganaturalview.（第二段描述海岛基本情况，概括发展前后海岛上主体不变的部分）However,thewestsidetreesaresurroundedbyaccommodations,withafootpat

8、hlinkingthemtothebeachwhereaswimmingzoneiscloselyconnected.Nexttothewesternmostaccommodations,thereisareceptionbuildingaroundwhichvehicletracksheadingtothesouthernpierfortouristsailinghasbeenpaved.Ontheoppositesideofthepier,arestaurantstandsatthenorthsideneartheseashore.Finally,thecenteroftheislandh

9、asalsobeendesignedtosupplyhousingfortourists.（第三段重点对比发展前后两幅图中发生的变化情况）Insumzaftercomparingthetwodrawings,thetremendousdevelopmentsareevidentThesechangeshavecausedthewesternandcenterareasoftheislandtobecomecrowdedwithmodernfacilities.（全文总结，指出发展前后海岛上的巨大变化）满分要素剖析语言表达本段中一个长句子之得学习。Nexttothewesternmostacco

10、mmodations,thereisareceptionbuildingaroundwhichvehicletracksheadingtothesouthernpierfortouristsailinghasbeenpaved.首先句子中有一个WhiCh引导的定语从句，先行词是areceptionbuilding.在定语从句中，又有一个动名词后置作为定语，修饰VehiCIetracks.同理，注意下面这个句子。However,thewestsidetreesaresurroundedbyaccommodations,withafootpathlinkingthemtothebeachwhereaswimmingzoneiscloselyconnected,linkingto修饰footpath,而Where引导的定语从句修饰beach.逻辑结构文章采用总-分-总结构。开篇指出了发展前后海岛发生了巨大变化，接下来分别描述两幅图片中的细节，指出了不变和变化的部分。最后一段总结了全文。