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1、读后续写之大与动物:勇敢小洞雪中救大Intheheartofabitterwinter,snowblanketedtheland,tuningtheworldintoafrostywonderland.Inasmallvillagenestledamidsttheicylandscape,anunusualtaleunfolded,starringadognamedMaxandagroupofvillagers.Max,aloyalandspiritedcompanion,belongedtoalovelygirlnamedEmma.Together,theybravedtheharshwin
2、ters,findingcomfortintheirunwavering(坚定的)bond.Onefatefulevening,astheicywindshowledoutside,asuddensnowstormstruckthevillage.Snowpiledhigh,makingtheroadsdangerousandactofseeingnearlyimpossible.Thevillage,spowersupplywascutoffleadingtheworldintodarkness.Inthemidstofthestorm,Emmafoundherselflostinthefr
3、eezingwilderness.ShehadgoneouttofetchfirewoodforherfamilywhileMaxwaskeptathome,butthesnowstormhaddisoriented(使.失去方向)her,leavingherinseveredanger.Emma,sparents,consumedwithworry,desperatelysearchedforher.4Emma!Emma!hermothercalledoutherdaughter,snamemadlybutgotnoresponse.Emmaveryprobablylostherconsci
4、ousnessonsuchacoldnight.Moreandmorevillagersjoinedthesearch.Theycombedthroughthedarkwoods,theirbreathformingmistyclouds.Thewindhowledmournfully(哀伤地),echoingeveryone,sworry.Max,sensingtheurgencyandthebondbetweenhumans,sprangintoaction.Withhiskeensenseofsmellandgreatdetermination,hesetouttofindthelost
5、girl.Throughthebitingcoldandswirlingsnow,MaxfollowedEmma,sSCent(气味),notfrightenedbythefreezingtemperatures.PcIraI:ASMaXSearChedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.Para2:2sthetwofiguresemergedfromthestorm,everyoneWatehedinwe(敬敛情节设计:ParaI:sMaxsearchedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednume
6、rouschallenges.MaX遇到哪些困难-找到昏迷的Emma一带着她返回Para2:Asthetwofiguresemergedfromthestorm,everyonewatchedinawe(敬畏).众人和妈妈的反应一MaX高兴自豪-人们称赞小狗了不起范文:ASMaXnavigatedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.Thesnowweighedheavilyonhissmallbody,slowinghisprogress.Hispawsgrewnumbwithcold,andhisfurbecamecovere
7、dwithice.Despiteallthedifficulties,hepersistedinhissearchinguntilfinallyhediscoveredEmmabeneathasnow-coveredtree.雪重重压在它小小的身体上,减缓了它的前进。它的爪子冻麻了,皮毛也被冰覆盖了。尽管种种困难,它还是坚持寻找,直到最后在一棵白雪覆盖的树下发现了Emma。Withaburstofexcitement,Maxbarkedjoyfully,awakeningthegirlfromherunconsciousstateandgentlylickedhertomakeherWarme
8、r.带着一阵兴奋,Max开心地地吠叫了起来,把女孩从无意识的状态中唤醒,并轻轻地舔她,让她暖和一些。 Comingtoherselfandshiveringfromthecold,EmmaclungtoMax,swarmfurashecarefullyguidedherbackhome.艾玛恢复了知觉,打着寒战,她紧紧抓住麦克斯温暖的皮毛,而它小心翼翼地领着她回家。ASthetwofiguresemergedfromtheSto门n,CllltheViIlagerSWafChedin卬e. Inaflash,themotherrecognizedherdaughter,frightenedbu
9、talive.Overwhelmedwithwildexcitement,themothercollapsedtoherknees,handstremblingasshereachedouttothegirl,“ThankGod!Youareback!”刹那间,母亲认出了她的女儿,受到惊吓,但还活着。母亲激动不已,跪倒在地上,双手颤抖着,向女孩伸出手来:“感谢上帝!你回来了!” Maxcircledaroundthereunitedmotheranddaughter;tailwaggingjoyfully.Max绕着团聚的母亲和女儿转圈,高兴地摇着尾巴。 Thevillagers,witnes
10、singthisheartwarmingmoment,letoutcollectivesighsofrelief.TheirfaceswereilluminatedbysmilesthatmeltawaytheCoId.村民们目睹了这一温暖人心的时刻,共同松了一口气。他们的脸被这融化了寒冷的微笑照亮了。 MaxhadnotonlysavedEmmabuthadalsoignitedasenseofunitywithinthecommunity,makingthebitterwinteraseasonofhopeandgratitude.MaX不仅救了Emma,而且还在社区内点燃引发了一种团结感
11、,使这个严冬成为一个充满希望和感激的季节。最终自测:ASMaxnavigatedthefrozenlandscape,heencounterednumerouschallenges.令雪重重压在它小小的身体上,减缓了它的前进。它的爪子冻麻了,皮毛也被冰覆盖了。尽管这种种困难,它还是坚持寻找,直到最后在一棵白雪覆盖的树下发现了艾玛。令带着一阵兴奋,MaX开心地地吠叫了起来,把女孩从无意识的状态中唤醒,并轻轻地舔她,让她暖和一些。令艾玛恢复了知觉,打着寒战,她紧紧抓住麦克斯温暖的皮毛,而它小心翼翼地领着她回家。ASthetwofiguresemergedfromtheSto门n,alltheViI
12、lagerSWaiChedin4卬e.令刹那间,母亲认出了她的女儿,受到惊吓,但还活着。母亲激动不已,跪倒在地上,双手颤抖着,向女孩伸出手来:“感谢上帝!你回来了!”Max绕着团聚的母亲和女儿转圈,高兴地摇着尾巴。令村民们目睹了这一温暖人心的时刻,共同松了一口气。他们的脸被这融化了寒冷的微笑照亮了。令MaX不仅救了Emma,而且还在社区内点燃引发了一种团结感,使这个严冬成为一个充满希望和感激的季节。语料默写:1 .重重压在上2 .减缓了它的前进3 .冻麻了4 .尽管种种困难5 .坚持寻找6 .开心地吠叫7 .把从无意识的状态中唤醒8 .轻轻地舔9 .某人恢复了知觉10 .打着寒战11 .紧紧抓住12 .刹那间13 .激动不已14 .跪倒在地15 .绕着转圈16 .高兴地摇着尾巴17 .目睹了这一温暖人心的时刻18 .共同松了一口气19 .被微笑照亮了20 .融化了寒冷21 .点燃引发了一种团结感22 .一个充满希望和感激的季节