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1、选择性必修三三单元写作考题回假设你是李华,你的英国好友Leslie发来电子邮件询问你所在社区周围的环境状况,请你给他回一封电子邮件。邮件主要包括以下内容:(1)社区环境状况和存在的问题;(2)建议采取的措施;(3)可能的结果。注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。DearLeslie,Now,mwritingtointroducethestateoftheenvironmentinourcommunity,Yours,LiHua写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)(1)一审:确定写作体掰口主题体裁:应用文回复邮件主题:介绍社区的环保
2、问题(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体掰口主题息息相关)时态:以一般现在时为主人称:以第三人称为主,第一人称为辅(3)三明确明确写作要点:给Leslie回复电子邮件T社区环境状况和存在的问题(总体很好,但是有人乱扔垃圾)一建议采取的措施一可能的结果。(4)四分段黄金分段法则:结合文章内容分三段。第一段现状和问题;第二段采取的措施;第三段可能出现的结果。关键词语introduce,generallyspeaking,beworthyof,garbagezdozensof,tolerate,takestrictmeasures,carryOUtjegIllatiOn,inthemeanwhile,r
3、ecommend,install,finezimplementzharmonious(2)完成句总的来说,值得表扬。(beworthyof)Gererallyspeaking,itisWorthyOfbeingpraised.有强有力的证据表明,一些居民经常到处扔垃圾。(Thereisevidence.)ThereisStrongevidencethatafewresidentsfrequentlydropgarbageeverywhere.情况太差了,很多人都无法忍受它。(so.that,toIerate)TheSitUationisSoterriblethatdozensOfPeOPIeC
4、arfttolerateit.毫无疑问,有必要采取严格的措施,并执行一些规定。(Thereisnodoubtthat.)ThereisrodoubtthatitsnecessarytotakeStriCtmeasuresandCarryOUtSOmeregulations.那些被抓到乱扔垃圾的人应该被罚款。(becaughtdoingsth.zfine)ThoSeCaUghtthrowingawaygarbageShOUIdbefined.随着这些措施的最终实施,我们相信一个和谐的社区将被建造。(withsth.done,harmonious)Withthesemeasuresimplemen
5、tedfinally,wereConfidentthataharmoniousCOmmUrityWillbebuilt.范文DearLeslie,NowzmWritingtointroducthestateoftheenvironmentinourcommunity.beingpraised.ButtereisStrongevidencethaafewresidentsfrequentlydropgarbageeverywhere.ThesituationisSOterriblethatdozensOfpeoplecan,ttolerateit.Thereisnodoubtthatitsnec
6、essarytotakeStriCtmeasuresandcarryoutsomeregulations.Inthemeanwhile,someresidentsstronglyIeCommendthathighdefinitioncamerashouldbinstalled.Thosecaughtthrowingawaygarbageshouldbefined.Withthesemeasuresimplementedfinally,we,reconfidentthataharmoniouscommunitywillbebuilt.Yours,1.iHuagenerallySPeaking总的来说Thereisstrongevidencethat.有强有力的证据表明beworthyOf值得so.,that.如此.以至于.Thereisnodoubtthat.毫无疑问inthemeanwhile与止匕同时;在此期间recommendthat.(should)do.推荐做catchsb.doingsth.发现某人正在做某事With复合结构with+宾语+过去分词构