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1、托福作文写作范文详解Whenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardwork.Luckhasnothingtodowithsuccess.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththequotationabove?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainyourposition.1 .题目翻译:成功是因为运气还是辛勤工作?2 .审题关键词:Succeed;Hardwork;Luck;Reasons;Examples;Agreeordisagree3 .论证分析:反:Luckmeansonemayencounteralifeopp
2、ortunityormeetsomeoneimportantwhichleadstosuccess.反:Aluckymistakeordiscoverymaybringunexpectedsuccess.正:Whenopportunitycomes,thehard-workingpeoplearebetterpreparedtoseizeit.范文:Whenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardwork,butluckhasalottodowithit,too.Successwithoutsomeluckisalmostimpossible.TheFrenchemper
3、orNapoleonsaidofoneofhisgenerals,Iknowhesgood.Butishelucky?NapoleonknewthatallthehardworkandtalentintheWorldoftencantmakeupforbadluck.Howeverzhardworkofteninvitesgoodluck.此段结构本段是一个分总的结构。首先第一句话提出了一个社会上错误的观点。第二句话对此进行反驳。后面引用名人名言表明作者观点,并进行升华,点出hardworkofteninvitesgoodIUCk.即好运气也是很重要的。此段功能本段是文章首段,对文章要讨论的内
4、容提供了背景和相关的名人名言,然后点明了作者立场,并提出论点。Whenitcomestosuccess,luckcanmeanbeingintherightplaceandtherighttime,orhavingtherightskillstogetajobdone.Itmightmeanturningdownanofferandthenhavingabetteroffercomealong.Nothingcanreplacehardwork,butworkinghardalsomeanskeepingyoureyesOpenJookingforpossibilitiesandexpecti
5、ngtheunexpected.Opportunityisoftenoutofourcontrolandveryoftendependsonluck.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。后面对此进行了分析阐述。段内进行了让步,承认了努力工作的重要性,但是告诉我们更要重视运气和机会。此段功能本段是文章的第二段,也就是正文第一段,写了支持作者立场的第一个分论点。HowmanyofthegreatinventionsanddiscoveriescameaboutthroughaluckymistakeoraIuckychance?Oneofthebiggestluckymista



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