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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目：Nowadaysthewaymanypeopleinteractwitheachotherhaschangedbecauseoftechnology.Inwhatwayshastechnologyaffectedthetypesofrelationshipspeoplemake?Hasthisbecomeapositiveornegativedevelopment?1 .话题和题型分类科技类；混合类2 .题目分析科技是如何影响人际沟通的？这种改变好不好？3 .思路提示A.如何影响人际沟通？手机可以使人们联系更加紧密博客使人们的联系更加多元化B.这种改变好不好？提高了沟

2、通效率青少年容易沉迷虚拟社交个人信息容易被泄露SampleAnswerIthinkthattechnologyhaslargelyaffectedthevarioustypesofrelationshipsbetweenpeopleinapositivewaybecausetechnologyhashelpedpeopletomakefriendsandmaintaincloserelationshipwitheachother.（首段开篇摆明观点：科技在人们交朋友以及维持关系两方面影响着人们的交往）Mostimportantly,inmyopinion,technologyhasenable

3、dpeopletostayincontactwitheachothermoreclosely.PeoplecanusetheInternetandmobilephonestospeaktoandsendinformationtoeachother.Moreover,thisinformationcanbeintheformofpicturesorvideos.Thusfevenifpeoplearefarfromeachother,theycanfeelclose.Inthemodernworldzwherepeopleoftenliveandworkorstudyindifferentpla

4、ces-evendifferentcountries-fromthosewheretheirfamilymembersare；thiscanbeveryimportant.Inthisway,technologyhelpspeopletomaintainexistingrelationships.（文章第二段分析科技对人际关系的一种影响）Secondly,technologyhasallowedpeopletobecomefriendswithotherswithwhomtheywouldnormallynotbeabletomakefriends.Inthepast,peoplemighth

5、avehadpenpalsinothercountriesbutnow,thankstosocialnetworkingwebsites,peoplecaneasilyconnectwiththosewhohavesimilarinterests.Itistruethattheserelationshipsmightnotbeverystrong,buttheycandevelopifthefriendsusethemasthebasisforformingcloserfriendshipsoriftheyvisiteachother,scountries.Thefactthatmostoft

6、herelationshipscreatedonsocialnetworkingsitesarenotstrongdoesnotmeanthatsuchsitesareworthless.（分析科技对人际关系的另一种影响：在网络上，人们很容易就可以与有相似兴趣的人认识）Inconclusion,theeffecttechnologyhashadonrelationshipsofdifferenttypesisgenerallypositivebecauseithelpspeopletomakefriendsandtomaintainrelationships.Technologynowallo

7、wsformoreintimatecontactevenwhenpeoplearephysicallylocatedfaraway.（全文总结再次重申观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文语言简单明了，清晰表达了作者观点。连接词如mostimportantly,moreoverthus,secondly,inconclusion使文章更连贯流畅，便于读者把握文章要点。Itistruethattheserelationshipsmightnotbeverystrong,buttheycandevelopifthefriendsusethemasthebasisforformingcloserfriendshipsoriftheyvisiteachotherscountries.句型KiStnJethat.but.可用于提反面论据来让步，but后阐述作者所持观点。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段分析影响因素，第三段从反面表明并非所有人能获得工作满足感，使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者强调自己的观点。