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1、读后续写：帮助流浪汉回家IhadstoppedattheSwindonSerViCeS（月艮务区）whileonmywaybackto1.ondon.AsIdroveupthesliproad,Ispottedamanwithabackpackandhisthumb（拇指）out.Ipulledoverandloweredthewindow.“Whichwayareyouheading?Iasked.mgoingbackto1.ondon.“Ah,thatwouldbegrand,camehisimmediatereply.HeopenedthedoorandIiftedhisbackpack

2、ontothebackseat.umBrendan,hesaidwithaneasysmileandarichIriSh（爱尔兰）tongue.Iwasgettingabitdesperate.Ivehadmythumboutforadayandhalf.Nobodyseemstostopthesedays.”Thaventeatenindays,saidBrendan.mtryingtogethome.”vealwaysenjoyedpickinguphitchhikers.Iusedtobeamotoringjournalistandcrossedthecountryinvariouste

3、stcars.PickingupahikeralwaysmademefeelalittlelessguiltyaboutallthemilesIwasdoing.Asweheadedeastalongthemotorway,Brendantoldmehowhecametobewaitingforaliftonthatparticularevening,andalsoaboutthetworecentfamilytragedies（悲居）thathadruinedhimandpushedhimoutofhisoldlifeandontotheroad.Brendantoldmethathewas

4、52,HelaughedalotandenjoyedhisOff-grid（不入网的）lifestyle.Untillastweek,thatis,whenhe,dbeenmugged（抢劫）.“ThreeyoungmeninBirminghamtookmyotherpackandithadallmymoneyinit.vebeensleepingoutsincethen.Ihaventeatenindays.mhopingtogetsomecasualworkin1.ondon,soIcanthengetmyselfhometoIreland.Itmusthavebeentheconcept

5、ofhomethatgotme,andhelpingamanwho,dclearlyhadatoughtimeseemedliketherightthingtodo.Paral:ASWe卬e%approachingtheHeaihrOwturn-off（希罗机场岔道）,/hadanidea.Para2:BeforeheIe负tobuyhisairticket,IIegavemeahugehug.情节设计：笔记：atthethoughtof一想到,atthesightof.一看到，动作衔接；情绪+动作+语言描写激动的情绪Para2:BeforeheIefttobuyhisairticket,he

6、gavemeClIlUgehug. Meanwhile,hepromisedtomethathewouldpaymebackassoonashesavedenoughmoney.IhuggedhimbackandexpressedwhatIexpectedfromhim,whichwasspreadingthekindnessinsteadofrepayingme.与此同时，他向我保证，一旦他攒够了钱就会还给我。我也拥抱了他，表达了我对他的期望，那就是把善意传递出去，而不是还给我钱。 Respondingwithadeterminednod,Brendansaidmygenerosityrei

7、gnitedhisfaithinlifeandhewouldsurelycontinuemychainofkindness.Havingbidfarewelltome,heblendedintothecrowd,whichwasascenefillingmewithfulfillmentandContentmen1.Brendan坚定地点了点头，说，我的慷慨重新燃起了他对生活的信心，他肯定会继续我的善良之链。和我告别后，他融入了人群，这是一个让我充满了满足感的画面。 Withthegoldensunshinefloodinginthroughthecarwindow,Iwasonmywayto

8、1.ondonagain,金色的阳光透过车窗照进来，我又重新踏上去伦敦的路途。笔记：语料【重燃生活信心，继续善良之链】【金色阳光结尾句】最终自测：Paral:ASWe卬ereapproachingtheHeCuhrOWturnoff,IhadCmidea.我突然想到我可以给他钱买一张去爱尔兰的机票。想到这里，我赶紧把这个绝佳的想法说出来。我的话让布兰登猝不及防，他目瞪口呆。脸上满是难以置信和感激之情，他咬着嘴唇，试图眨回泪水。“谢谢你。”他哽咽着说。我把车开到机场高速公路上，很快就把他送到候机楼外。Para2:BeforeheIefttobuyhisairticket,hegavemeahug

9、ehug.与此同时，他向我保证，一旦他攒够了钱就会还给我。我也拥抱了他，表达了我对他的期望，那就是把善意传递出去，而不是还给我钱。Brendan坚定地点了点头，说，我的慷慨重新燃起了他对生活的信心，他肯定会继续我的善良之链。和我告别后，他融入了人群，这是一个让我充满了满足感的画面。金色的阳光透过车窗照进来，我又重新踏上去伦敦的路途。结尾句2：毫不夸张地说，这次难忘的经历就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在某人记忆的长河。Thereisnoexaggerationtouttertheunforgettableexperienceislikeanever-lastingflower,bloominginth

10、eriverofmymemory.结尾句3：人生并不总是一床玫瑰花（一帆风顺），但陌生人的爱与善良真正温暧了一个孤独而受伤的灵魂。1.ifeisnotalwaysabedofroses,buttheloveandkindnessfromastrangercandefinitelywarmalonelyandwoundedsoul.语料默写：.某人突然想到（句型）2 .一想到这3 .绝佳的想法4 .和盘托出5 .让某人猝不及防6 .脸上写满难以置信和感激之情7 .咬着嘴唇8 .试图忍住泪水9 .哽咽着说10 .坚定地点了点头作为回复U.重新燃起了他对生活的信心12 .继续善良之链13 .融入了人

11、群14 .让某人充满了满足感的画面15 .金色的阳光透过车窗照进来，我又重新踏上去伦敦的路途。16 .毫不夸张地说，这次难忘的经历就像一朵永恒的花朵，盛放在某人记忆的长河。17 .人生并不总是一床玫瑰花，但陌生人的爱与善良真正温暖了一个孤独而受伤Para1:AsWeWereaDDroachi砍theHeaihrOWIHrn-Off（希思罗机场岔道）、Ihadanidea.我想替他买机票一Brendan非常惊讶一送他到了机场Para2:BefOreheIefilobnvhisairIiCke1.he*avemea/?Jgehw.；-I再次表达感谢，说要还钱一婉拒，希望传递善意一告别，我的感受泡X

12、ParCl:AS卬eWe琛approachingtheHeathroWtumoff、IIladanideaItdawnedonmethatIcouldaffordhimmoneytopurchaseatickettoIreland.Atthethoughtofthis,Ihastenedtopouroutthefantasticidea.我突然想到我可以给他钱买一张去爱尔兰的机票。想到这里，我赶紧把这个绝佳的想法说出来。MywordscaughtBrendanoffguard,whowasdumbfounded.Withdisbeliefandgratitudewrittenonhisface,hebithislips,tryingtoholdbacktears.44Thankyou.,hesaidinachokedVoiCe.我的话让布兰登猝不及防，他目瞪口呆。脸上满是难以置信和感激之情，他咬着嘴唇，试图眨回泪水。“谢谢你。”他哽咽着说。Ipulledoutintotheairporthighwayandsoondroppedhimoffoutsidetheterminalbuilding.我把车开到机场高速公路上，很快就把他送到候机楼外。