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1、读后续写：寻找Abdel阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThisparticulardaybeganatseveninthemorninginCasablanca（卡萨布兰卡）.MyFriendMikeandIweregoingtovisitAbdel,ayoungmanwe,dworkedwithonaVolunteerprojectinKenitra,anindustrialcityontheMorccan（摩洛哥）coast.He,dbeenexpectingustoarriveinCasablancaforafewdaysnow,andsinc

2、ehehadnotelephone,he,dwrittendownhisaddressandnameandtoldustojustshowup-hismotherandSisterswerealwaysathome.Apparentlytheaddresshehadwrittendownwashardforforeignerslikeustounderstand.WhenWegotintotheneighborhood,ourtaxidriverstartedaskingdirections.Eventually,withthehelpofapoliceman,Wewereledtoahous

3、edownawindingroad.Ourdriverwenttothedoorandinquired.HecamebacksayingAbdeFssisterwasinthishousevisitingfriendsandwouldcomealongtoshowuswheretheylived.Soonagirlofaboutsixteenemergedfromthehouse.Surprisingly,shedidn,tlooklikeAbdelatall.Still,dseenotherfamilieswherechildrendidntlookalike,soIdidntgiveitt

4、oomuchthought.Shethenbroughtustoayard.Wewaitedintheyardwhilethesisterwentinandreturnedaccompaniedbyhermother,sistersandbrother-in-law,allofwhomgreeteduswithcautiouswarmth.Wewereshownintothelivingroom.ThemothertoldusinbrokenFrenchthatAbdelwasout,butwouldbehomesoon.Wesatonlow,cushionedseats,drinkingsw

5、eetmintteaandeatingsugarcookies,whilethefamilymemberssatwithusandmadeshy,politeconversationthatfrequentlyfellintouncomfortablesilence.Anhourpassed,morefamilymembersemergedfrominnerrooms.Iwasagainstruckbythefactthatnoneofthemlookedathinglikeourfiend.AfteranothertwohourshadpassedwithnosignofAbdel,thef

6、amilyinsistedonservingusamealintheirkitchennextdoor.tSoon11wastheonlyresponseIgotwhenIinquiredasstowhattimeAbdelmightcomeback.注意：续写词数应为150左右Finallyweheardthewordswehadbeenwaitingforfromthemother.PleasesAbelisbackinthelivingroom,ItookoutthepieceofpapeAbdelhadgivenmeinKenitraandshowedittothenewAbdel.审

7、题：仔细阅读素材，提取关键信息，第3段，“surprisingly,shedidn,tlooklikeAbdelatall”,第4段,“IwasstruckbythefactthatnoneofthemlookedathingIikeoUrfriend。加上第二段信息句中thenewAbdel,我们可以推测出，“我和Mike”应该是找错了人,此AbdeI非Abde1。根据以上分析，第一段是我们和AbdeI碰面，发现找错人了，从而过渡到第二段，把字条的信息给AbdeI看；第二段,则是这个Abdel恍然大悟,然后带我们找到了要找的那个Abde1。那么主旨如何确定呢？从上文的素材中，有着蛛丝马迹-第

8、3段“allofwhomgreeteduswithcautiouswarmth,第5段，“thefamilyinsistedonservingusamcao为什么会给出这个信息呢？面对陌生人，有温暖，有耐心，执意留我们吃饭，表达出热情，善良和真诚，所以可以把主旨确定为Warmth和kindnesso范文：FimllIy卬eheardtheWo尸dsWehadbeenWaitingfOrfrOinthemother,“Please,AbdelisbackintheIiVingroom.” Anxiousandexpectant,Westrodetothelivingroom.焦虑而期待，我们大步

9、走到客厅。 Standinginitwasamaninhisthirties,obviouslynotourfriend.44Hello.mAbdel.Havewemetsomewherebefore?”Heaskedinasurprisedvoice,faceetchedwithConfUSiOn.站在里面的是一个三十多岁的人，显然不是我们的朋友。“你们好，我是阿卜杜勒。我们以前在哪见过吗？他用惊讶的声音问道，脸上满是困惑。 Now,WeweresureWefoundthewrongguy,andtoliftusoutoftheawkwardsituation,Istammered,uSo-

10、sorry,itseemedthatWemadeamistake.,现在我们确信自己找错人了，为了摆脱尴尬的处境，我结结巴巴地说：“抱歉，似乎我们搞错了。” ThenAbdclexclaimedheartily,Itdoesn,tmatteratal1.Afterhearingourstory,heaskedustoshowthemtheaddress.然后阿卜杜勒大声说道：没关系。”听到我们的故事后，他让我们把地址给他们看。(衔接下文)stride(strode)vi.大步走etchv.铭刻ItookOUtthepieceOfPaPerAbdelhadgive/tmebackinKenitr

11、aandSaoWedittothezewAbde1. Aha!ItsAbdelexclaimedindelight.4Themanyou,relookingforlivesintheneighboringvillage.1.etmebeyourguide.啊哈!是他!阿卜杜勒喊道。“你们要找的人住在附近的村庄里，让我做你们的向导。 WelatergotunitedwiththeveryAbdel,andourrelationshipgotstrengthenedbecauseoftheroundaboutjourney.后来我们和要找的阿卜杜勒碰头了，因为这次曲折的行程，我们的关系也变得更紧密

12、。 Butmoreimportantly,weestablishedanewandmeaningfulcontactwithnewAbdelthankstothecoincidence.1.ookingback,Ifeelmuchblessed,andwarmthtogetherwithkindnessstillmakemymindripple.但更重要的是，多亏了这个巧合，我们同后来这位阿卜杜勒建立了全新有意义的联系。回首过去，我感到很幸福，这些温暖和善良依然在我的心中泛起涟漪。exclaimv.大声呼喊roundabouta.曲折的ripplev.泛起涟漪n.涟漪官方范文：FinanyWe

13、heardtheWordSWehadbeenWaitingforfiomthemother,“Please,AbdClisbackintheIiVingroom.Weenteredthelovelylivingroomandayoungmancameforwardwithanuncertainexpressiononhisface.uHello,IamAbdel.hesaidcautiously.ImmediatelyIrealizedtherewasamistake.uI-msorry,mafraidyouarenottheAbdelWearelookingfor,Igigglednervo

14、usly.Forasplitsecondnoonesaidanything.ThenAbdelexclaimedheartily,uItdoesn,tmatteratAfterhearingourstory,heaskedustoshowthemtheaddress.ItookOUtthePieCDOfpaperAbdelhadgivenmebackinKenKraandShoWedittothenewAbde1.ThisisBaalalAbdel!,saidthesecondAbdel.uWcwenttoschooltogether!Heliveslessthanakilometerfrom

15、here.Iwillbringyoutohishouse.Aftertakingphotosandexchangingaddresseswiththefamily,wehuggedgood-bye.ThenthenewAbdelledustothehomeofourfriendAbdel.There,Ireachedoutandhuggedhim.Allofusenjoyedwhatabeautifulsurpriseandsimplekindnesshadopenedtous:warmth,friendshipandsincerity.最终自测：FinaHyWeheardtheWOrdSWe

16、hadbeenWaitingforfimthemother,“Please,AbdeliSbackintheIiVingroom.我们走进那间可爱的客厅，一个年轻人走上前来，脸上露出一种不确定的表情。“你好，我是阿卜杜勒。”他小心谨慎地说。我立刻意识到有一个错误。“我，对不起，恐怕你不是我们要找的那个阿卜杜勒，“我紧张地咯咯笑着说。有那么一瞬间，没人什么也没说。然后阿卜杜勒热情地喊道：“这根本没关系。”听了我们的故事后，他让我们给他们看那个地址。ItookoutthepieceofpaperAbdelhadgivenmebackinKenitraandshoweditt。thenewAbde1.”这是巴拉勒阿卜杜勒！”第二个阿卜杜勒说。“我们一起去上学了！”他住在离这里不到一公里的地方。我就带你到他家去。”在拍照和与家人交换地址后，我们