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1、令人眼前一亮的读后续写12大高分句式(精品)读后续写句式1:无灵主语(用无生命的事物来做主语)(1)心理、情绪:awaveof+情绪名词+固定动词+sb”AwaveofsorrowwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.描述心情的名词happiness/joy/delight开心anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow/grief悲伤gratitudeareciation感激admiration钦佩/赞赏guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨f
2、earterrorfrightanic害怕/恐慌astonishmentshocksurriSe震惊动词seizecatch(caught过去式)strike(struck过去式)surroundtakeholdofwashovercomeover+sb.有行为意义的名词:“一见到/一想到”Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情绪形容词:一见/想到sth,某人.一Atthesight/thoughtofsth,sbdidsth:一见/想到sth,某人例:1.一想到和爷爷度过的时光,我就感到十分快乐。Thethoughtofthemomentssharedwithgrandp
3、afilledmewithgreatjoy.2.一见到那头熊,他就紧张。Whenhesawthebear,hefeltverynervous.(改写)(3)无生命事物作主语,结尾句:1 .Thewordsstilllingeredinone,smind.那此话还蒙绕在心头。2 .Thestorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.3 .Theexperienceenlightenedhimthat.这段经历让他明白.4 .Anideasuddenlystrucksb.that+句子.(某人突然想到)5.ItgraduallydawnedU
4、POnmethat.(我逐渐意识到)读后续写句式2:比喻(多用于情绪/动作描写,强调)情绪句式一:“likeaxxx”aFilledWith+情绪,sbdosthlikeaxxxwFiIIedWithrage,heChargedtowardsmeIikeafurybull/Iior.他满腔怒火,如愤怒的公牛/狮子向我冲来。Faningintosadness,Roseburiedherfaceinarmslikeadeflatedballoon.像泄了气的气球。DroWllinlaughter,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatelikeafreebird.Happines
5、swashedoverhimIikeWaITnsunshine.幸福像暖阳洒在他身上。AngertookholdOfhimIikeaWikibeast.愦怒像野兽一样抓住了他。情绪句式二:“as+情绪形容词+as+意象”开心(be)ashappyas(be)ashappyas(be)ashappyas(地道俚语;clam蚌)例:Onthelastdayofschool,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatefeelingasfreeasabird.紧张;不安樵虑(anxious/upset)asnervousasanantCOnahotPan)热锅上的蚂蚁=asnervou
6、sasaCatOnhotbricks(地道俚语)害怕Atthesightofthesnake,sheturnedaspaleas喜(形容词可替代:pleased;delighted;cheerful;overjoyed;joyful;blissful)ashappyasakingashappyasapiginmudashappyasaclamathightide怒(形容词可替代:mad;furious)asangryasabullangryasaragingstorm哀assadasahomelessdog累(形容词可替代:exhausted)astiredasthewingsofabirda
7、stiredasaworn-outshoeastiredasanox紧张不安asnervousasanantonahotpanasnervousasacatonhotbrick害怕sb,sfaceturnedaspaleasasheetasstrongasanox健壮如牛/强/厉害astoughasoldboots坚强asslyasafox像狐狸一样狡猾assilentasastone沉默asbusyasabee忙得团团转ashungryasahunter饿asheavyasanelephant像头大象一样重aseasyasapieceofcake轻而易举assickasadog身体不舒服,病
8、得严重asbitterasasourlime苦闷asproudasapeacock像孔雀一样骄傲ascoldasice冰冷asfunnyasamonkey像猴子一样有趣asbigasabus体积大assillyasasheep傻asbrightasdaylight心情/脸亮起来asbraveasalion像狮子一样勇敢asradiantasroses容光焕发asplayfulasakitten顽皮调皮asshiningasdiamonds像钻石般闪耀He,sasgoodasgold善良友好asgentleasabreeze像微风一样温柔情绪句式三:aseaofsorroww(anoceanof
9、/awhirlwindof)(暗喻)Shefeltawhirlwindofhappinesspassingthroughher.股幸福的旋风掠过她Shedrownherselfinaseaofsorrow.她将自己淹没在悲伤的海洋中读后续写句式3:倒装句(全部倒装)1.句首:地点状语(副词/介词短语)全部倒装Onthetray(托盘)WereapieceofsandwichandoatPorridge(燕麦粥)Insidetheboxlayastunningnecklace.Atthefootofthehillsstoodaschool.Inhishandswasabunchofflowers
10、.(一束花)2.倒装句(部分倒装)后接一般疑问句语序句首:否定词(SeldOm;Rarely;NeVer)Seldomhasheseensuchafiercecreaturebefore.(陈述语序Hehasseldomseen.)NeVerhadShebeenmorehelpless.(原本陈述语序:Shehadneverbeen.)(2)句首:1.ittIe(几乎不;常与,感受”类的词搭配,如UiIderStand,know,realize)1.ittlehadIrealizedtheurgencyofthetask.我还没意识到这项任务的紧迫性1.ittleWaSSheawarethat
11、hewasgone.我没意识到/我不清楚1.ittIedidSheUnderStandwhatthemanwastalkingabout.她不知他在说啥句首:Onn。account/UndernoCirCilmStanCeS(绝不)OnnoaccountShoUldyoujudgeapersonbytheappearance.UndernocircumstancesShC)UldWeStartaprojectwithoutanypreparation.(4)句首:OIlIy+状语(onlythen;onlywhen;onlyatthatmoment)Onlywhenthingsturnurge
12、ntwillItakeactiontogetthemsettled.只有当事情变得紧急时,我才会采取行动解决问题。OnlyinthiswayCoUIdIaddresstheissuewithouthurtingmum,sfeeling.Onlybyhardworkcanyouachieveyouraim.只有通过努力工作,你才能到达到目标。(achieveone,Saim达到目标)(5)句首:Nosooner.than./Hardly.when.(一就)原句:Ihadfinishedtheicecreamwhenmomcamebackwithabowlofbroccoli.Nosoonerha
13、dIfinishedtheicecreamthanmomcamebackwithabowlofbroccoli.(6)句首:So.that;Such.that“So+形容词that”(强加因果关系)64Such+be动词+名词(that)”(主语位置:suchwas和that放在原句主语前后)SoscaredWaSMaCthathestoodstill,notknowingwhattodototally.SoSWiftWaStheflowingWaterthathefailedtogetclosetothetrappedcar.Suchwastheawkwardexperiencethatre
14、mindedmeofthevalueofhonesty.(7)IIotOlly+倒装,butalso+正常语序NotonlyWaSJaneexhaustedandhungry,butshewasalsoextremelyregretfulforwhatshehaddone.(8)让步状语从句的倒装:“adj.+as/though+主谓”RelUCtantasIwas,Ihadnochoicebuttowashthedishesastold.(ThoughIwasreluctant,Ihadto.不愿)EXhaUStndaedhungryashewas,hecarriedonclimbingth
15、emountain.Uglythoughthemanwas,heboreakindheartaspureasadiamond.读后续写:倒装句(练习)1.1haven,teverfeltsolonely.-never2.1couldntworkbecauseoftheloudnoise.-so.that3.Shedidntplayalotofbasketball.-little4.Peterdidntunderstandthesituation.Ifhehad,hewouldhavequit.-had5.Thestoryhasntbeentoldcorrectly.-rarely6.Sheboughtthecarafterhehadexplaineditsbenefits.-onlyafter7.1don,teatporkveryoften.-seldom8.1wou